Here is my entry for the last CWWC challenge!

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After spending weeks in anticipation of this party, the day was finally here! Last month I had gotten an invitation in the mail for a masquerade ball, complete with dancing and food. I was overjoyed! I loved dressing up, dancing, and food, so a masquerade party sounded like entirely too much fun. I meticulously planned out a shopping trip to the mall to find myself a costume. But my shopping day didn’t exactly go like I had planned. First, my best friend Ashley couldn’t go with me, because she realized she had already made a babysitting appointment for that afternoon. Then, while I was at the mall, I stopped at Pizza Plaza for a bite to eat. They make the best Meat Lover’s pizza around! But I forgot that the costume store was in the “No Food or Drink” section, and calmly walked right up to the store with my half-eaten pizza slice in hand. Three words: supernatural mall cops. A mall cop was walking by several feet away with his back turned towards me. Just as I was about to enter the store, he turned around and sniffed his nose like he had smelled something, saw me with the pizza, and sprinted over shouting at me, “No food or drink in here, young lady!” I was so embarrassed that I didn’t have any appetite left for my pizza after that. When I finally walked into the costume store, I was so overwhelmed by all of the possibilities that it took me over an hour to choose an outfit. Finally, though, I decided on being a knight – er knightess, if that’s even a word – since I had loved stories of knights and castles since I was young.

But now everything was ready and my costume was on. “Bye Mom! If any of my friends drop by and wonder where I am, tell them I’m at 42nd street at the masquerade ball.” At that, I rushed out the door and onto the sidewalk. Ashley was carpooling me to the ball, since I hadn’t gotten a true driver’s license yet.

Ashley pulled up in front of a grand stone building with people in costumes milling about. I complemented her on her costume (she was dressed as a peacock, complete with a beautiful shimmery mask and real peacock tail feathers), and scurried into the building. Everything was so beautiful inside, both the costumes and the building! There was a long ornate table filled with delicious-looking morsels which I promptly made a beeline for, although my beeline was somewhat roundabout because I met a bunch of my friends and stopped to talk to them before I made it to the table. While filling my plate, I encountered another knight, only this was an actual knight, not a knightess! And the knight was super tall – like 6’ 5”.

“I see you got the message,” the knight chuckled, looking at my costume.

“Yep!” I replied, grinning.

“Your costume looks great!” we both said in unison.

“Oops,” I giggled. “What’s your name, O knight in shining armor?”

“Arthur,” the knight said, bowing.

“Really?” I gaped. “Like King Arthur! So a knight costume was a perfect choice for you. My name’s Olivia, which has absolutely nothing to do with knighthood, I just like knights and castles and stuff.”

“Uh-huh,” Arthur nodded.

I moved down the table, loading my plate with delicious delicacies. (That’s fun to say: “Delicious delicacies, delicious delicacies, delicious…” okay you get the point.) Arthur moved down the opposite side of the table. I sat at another beautifully decorated table with some other people I didn’t know in the least. Which didn’t bother me at all. We chatted awhile and complemented each other’s costumes, until the dance music started. There was music from every era to fit every costume. There was even medieval-sounding music! Arthur and I danced during that song. After we danced, he led me to a balcony at the back of the building, where no one else was, and shut the door behind us.

“Hey Olivia, I need to tell you something.” He led me over to the side of the balcony, and said, “Look down, and what do you see?”

I was a little puzzled by Arthur’s behavior, but as I was a trusting soul, I leaned over the stone post and scanned the city below. “I see the city of Luz and the mountains, and the river. Ooh! And three pretty white doves!” At that moment three of the purest, whitest birds I had ever seen flew up around me, and one settled at my feet.

Arthur smiled. “Those are my doves, from my homeland. You see, I don’t live in Luz. I live in Archland.”

I gazed at him, wide-eyed. “Archland! As in Archland of the silver seas and gold trees?” I had heard of Archland before, from my parents. It was almost a legend, like something you hear about in fairy tales. My mother and father were practically the only people that had ever seen it. On my mother and father’s honeymoon, they biked all over the country. One day they came to a forest, and biking through the forest, they found a cave. When they walked into the cave, they found that at the other end was a door. That door opened back into a forest, but not the forest they had started in. It was the beginning of Archland, a country where the waves were capped with silver foam and the trees were always as golden as autumn. The people of Archland were different too. They lived in large stone houses, almost like castles, and whenever they went out, they donned sturdy clothes that looked like armor. They kept livestock like pigs, cattle, and sheep, and also a few other breeds of animals that only lived in Archland, one of them being a species of pure white dove. They still lived by the rules of chivalry and honor, and when they met my mom and dad, a family of Archlanders invited them into their castle to stay overnight, but they admonished them never to tell anyone (except maybe their children) about Archland after they got home, because they didn’t want their peaceful land being overrun with humans from a different world. Not that my parents were disturbing the peace, they assured them, but they didn’t want their land to turn into some sort of circus attraction. My parents agreed. And I remembered another thing my parents had told me. They family they had stayed with had a newborn baby boy named Arthur.

“Yeah. I live in the Archland.”

“But how did you find me?” I questioned him.

“I’m a detective. That’s what I do – find people.”

I eyed Arthur skeptically. With his wonderfully crafted armor suit and amazing height, I didn’t think he was telling the truth. He was much too noticeable to be a detective, sneaking around and all that sort of thing.

“Mom told you, didn’t she?”

Arthur shook his head. “How did you know? I can never tell a good lie because my eyes always twinkle when I try to lie, but I thought maybe since my helmet covered my eyes you wouldn’t notice. I wanted to see how you reacted.”

“Well, you would be pretty conspicuous for a detective,” I said, looking him up and down. “And I figured maybe Mom and Dad would have told you where we lived when they went to visit, just in case your family wanted to visit us sometime. And we live in the same house as Mom and Dad did when they first got married, so, I thought maybe you went to our house, found Mom, and after a… maybe emotional reunion (at least on Mom’s part), you set out to find me.”

“Aww, shucks,” Arthur half-groaned. “Well, I suppose it’s for the best, since even if I could tell a lie, the law wouldn’t let me. I would never feel right about myself if I lied all of the time.”

It took me a minute to sort out what Arthur was saying. I mean, of course it was a very good thing to always tell the truth, but I was puzzled about the law part until I remembered that he lived in Archland. The law of Archland was very strict about such chivalrous matters as telling the truth.

“So what are you here for?” I queried.

Arthur looked down at the floor and shuffled his armored boots. “Mother and Father sent me on a mission to your family because Archland is in danger.”

I gasped for, like, the fourth time in one hour. “What’s the matter?”

“About a month ago, another man named Dexter from your world entered Archland, and was enchanted with what he saw. He was determined to tell his buddies and turn the cave into a sort of tour for people from your land to visit ours, even though we made it clear to him that we wanted our land kept secret. Who knows how long it will be before he carries his plan out, and then Archland will be overrun with crazy tourists.” Arthur sighed. “Father remembered a legend he once heard about there being a key “to close the door from world to world forevermore,” and he had never paid any attention to it until he realized that there actually was another world when your parents visited us. Father fished up the paper with the legend from his library, and it says that a child from your world needs to activate the key (once we even find it). We immediately wondered if your mother and father had had any children (since we trust your parents), and thought that perhaps the child could do it. So I found your parents house after a lot of searching, and went to find you. Only…” Now it was Arthur’s turn to look me up and down. “I realize that you aren’t exactly a child.” He gave a little nervous laugh. “Not that I would have it any other way, of course,” he assured me. “You are a very beautiful young lady, it’s just that… well, you know, we were hoping for a child for the key’s sake.”

I blushed at his complement. “Well, I am only fifteen, so I guess I’m not a true lady yet.”

Arthur started in surprise. “Oh! You are only fifteen?! I thought you were older than that!” I grinned. He continued, “But I would say that fifteen will be young enough for the key. I don’t know if you knew this or not, but in our world, people live longer, so fifteen to us would be like five or ten to you. I just forgot the different time frame, that’s all.”

“So.” Arthur unveiled his mask, revealing a pair of clear blue eyes, and kneeled before me. “Do you agree to help us, O knightess in shining armor?”

I gazed into Arthur’s eyes. “I do.”

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I liked that one pretty well. 🙂 I’m still going to continue the story for the 2nd challenge, but I’m not quite finished with the next part. It should be up pretty soon!

***Allison***

P. S. Do you like my new theme?

I’m back with two more stories I wrote for Loren’s CWWC challenge! Thank you so much for your sweet comments on the last stories – and I’m going to continue the second one, at least, so be looking for that after I finish this series. Now! Challenge 3:

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“Are we almost there yet?” I whined to Mom and Dad. We’d been driving in our blue sedan for hours, supposedly to our new house. The landscape out my window was very different from the scenery I was used to, but not interesting enough to keep me from asking my parents every few minutes if we were getting close. Besides, the scenery was different, but not in a good way. This particular highway ran along a rather dry and scrubby piece of land. It reminded my of my archenemy, peanut butter sandwich crackers. Mom got them every so often from the grocery store, despite my telling her repeatedly that I hated them, and she always made Dad and I eat them so we “wouldn’t waste good food.” Unfortunately, Dad liked peanut butter crackers, so I had no one on my side. But I digress.

“No, Julia, we are still not almost there, just the same as when you asked us five minutes ago,” Mom sighed with exasperation. “Just – look out the window or something.”

I groaned. “But Mom, that’s what I’ve been doing the entire 6 hours of this trip.”

“Well… do it some more – maybe you’ll spot a unicorn,” Dad called from the driver’s seat. I rolled my eyes. Spotting a unicorn would certainly make my day. It was to bad unicorns or dragons or even a cute little rabbit didn’t suddenly pop up outside my window and save me from dying of boredom. But I did spot something interesting, though it wasn’t an animal.

“Hey, Dad, look at that sign!” I pointed to a brown sign by the side of the road that proclaimed, “You’ve been here before. We just made sure you forgot.”

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“What a nice welcome to the state, huh?” I muttered.

Dad chuckled “At least we know the people here have a good sense of humor.”

“I don’t know if I’d call it ‘good,’ necessarily,” my mother said dryly. Then, “I know what we could do!” she exclaimed, brightening, “let’s sing some songs!”

Oh. Great. “Are we there yet?!”

Exactly two hours and 42 minutes later, we arrived at our new house.

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So this is it. This is home now, I thought to myself as my parents and I entered an old, ruinous house. It smelled of mildew and the floorboards creaked under my weight. I felt like Riley from my favorite movie, Inside Out when she and her parents first entered their “new” home. Only I didn’t play hockey. And thankfully, our moving van wasn’t delayed. But I decided I might as well get to know the place, and it would at least give me something to do.

“Mom and Dad, I’m gonna go explore,” I called as I thumped down dangerous-looking stairs to what I thought was probably the basement.

Wow, it’s kind of spooky down here. Cobwebs hung from the ceiling and the only light was a dim lightbulb off in a corner above a sink full of dust. It looked suspiciously like a mouse’s dream abode. This house, or so the landlord had told us, was built over a hundred years ago, and it sure looked that way. There had been renovations, of course – how did people even live without electricity and a bathroom! – but you could definitely see and smell its oldness seeping out of the house’s seams.

I crept around the basement, shivering in the chilly air. Soon I approached a little door in the wall. I wonder where this leads too? I tried to turn the door knob, but the door wouldn’t open. I pushed and heaved, and finally, the rusty lock just fell off and clattered to the floor. I cautiously opened the door on its creaking hinges. The room had no windows, so obviously it was pitch dark. I felt along the wall for a light switch, but my hands encountered nothing except dust and cobwebs. Maybe the door has been locked since the first owners moved out, and no one could install electricity in this room! I shivered with delight at this slightly spooky thought. Who knew what was in there.

I raced back up the stairs, grabbed a flashlight, and raced back down before Mom and Dad could corner me to help with unpacking. As I approached the door again, a thrill went through my whole body. What would I find? Treasure? Valuable antiques? A mystery waiting to be unraveled? I beamed my flashlight straight into the room, and saw…

Nothing. It was just a plain old room with nothing at all in it except cobwebs, a door, and lots of dust. Wait! Another door? I swung the light back to a little brown hidey-hole type door in one corner of the room. Of course, this could be another plain room, but then again, it might not be! I inched closer and closer, trying not to think of the dark blanket surrounding me, hiding anything from spiders to mice to… *gulp*… I shook my head and pressed on. This door was unlocked. I opened the door, hopefully, and again… nothing. This door opened into a slightly larger room, but there was nothing in it except for a small, ancient coin on the floor (which I pocketed), and… another door! I felt slightly ridiculous as I proceeded once again towards the door. I beamed my flashlight in, hoping against hope that this room might finally contain something interesting. But…

WHOA! I’d hit the jackpot! No, no treasure or anything, but this room was amazing –at least to an avid reader like me! All four walls were covered from top to bottom with bookshelves packed with ancient-looking books. There were two antique armchairs sitting on one side of the room, and a small writing desk occupying another side. This was a reader’s heaven! And since I was the first one to discover it, I’m sure my parents wouldn’t object to my keeping the room for myself. From my Dad’s reports, there was already a nice-sized study and den in the upstairs. Maybe I would like this house after all!

I trotted over to a bookshelf and selected at random a dusty volume. The cover showed a picture of a boy in armor pressed against the wall of pit, with a sword outstretched in his arm, ready to fight the roaring dragon in front of him. This was going to be good.

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I hurriedly opened to the middle of the book. I always did that when I was previewing a book, although Mom didn’t understand why I liked to ruin a good plot by jumping on it in the middle. As far as I was concerned, I had never injured or destroyed a good plot in my life. The first two sentences drew me in. The next paragraph got me hooked. I was drawn into a world where dragons were real, and the boy on the cover was just ready to enter into combat with the dragon. Soon I groped for an armchair and gave myself up to the charm of a magical world. Three pages later, I remembered that I had started in the middle. I shuffled the pages to the beginning, and – a piece of paper fell out! 

It was old, tattered, yellowed, just like you’d expect a treasure map to be. But instead of a map with a big red “X” on it, all I saw was a strange jumbling of letters and symbols on the page. A code! The only thing I liked better than a good book was a good code. I had read numerous good books on how to crack a good code, and I figured I could crack this one in just a matter of time.

“Ju-li-a,” Mom called from the top of the stairs. “Come help with supper, please.”

Aw, great. I sighed and slipped the paper back in the book. “Coming,” I yelled back, not very cheerfully. The code would have to wait.

After dinner, I eagerly returned to the secret room and my code. Before I had to go to bed, I thought I had deciphered the first few sentences of the writing. I am writing to you, dearest Annie, in the greatest of trouble. I trust that my good friend William will bring this note to you in safety. If I do not see you again, heed the instructions contained in this letter, and you will always be provided for. I was so excited I couldn’t get to sleep for a full twenty minutes! (Well, that’s a long time for me. Usually I’m out in five minutes.) I hadn’t yet told Mom or Dad about the secret rooms; instead I came upstairs as soon as they called me for bed so that I could keep the rooms a secret for a bit longer, but I knew that eventually they would find out. Until then, the bookshelf room would be my own special secret, and I would try my hardest to finish cracking the code. Maybe the letter contained a hint that would lead to something exciting like treasure! (You might have noticed by now that I was obsessed with the thought of finding treasure – I think I had read to many pirate books.) But even some old antiques or other letters would be fun to find. I couldn’t wait to start deciphering the code tomorrow!

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Challenge 4 (This one is eh… strange. I don’t usually write this way, and it isn’t my favorite thing I ever wrote, but anyway, here it is! It is also REALLY long, at least compared to some of my other stories, even though I edited it a little bit and took out some parts.)

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A young girl sits alone in a dark, gloomy corner, weeping, with her head on her knees. Her name is Kendra, and she is just one of the many children forced to work in a shoe-manufacturing factory. Dozens of other boys and girls work with her, and they all have one thing in common. They are outcasts. In Kendra’s world, if you are crippled, maimed, ugly, or disabled in any way, you are thrown out of the city limits and forced to work in one of the many factories on the outskirts of Dromeda. Why is Kendra an outcast? Because of her eyes. One eye is clear blue and the other, a dim black. She can only see out of the blue eye. Just because of this, Kendra is put to work, seven days a week, making shoes for all of the “perfect” people inside the safe city walls of Dromeda. No one loves the outcasts, but they are champions. They are just children – they aren’t supposed to be heroes, but they are, forging through every day with incredible strength and endurance.

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But Kendra cannot take this any more. She knows that she cannot live like this for much longer, or she will not live at all. Suddenly she stops weeping, and lifts her head, determination gleaming in both her eyes. She will stop this cruel way of life, if she must give her own life to do so.

Kendra walks slowly but determinedly back to the “village” made of sorry looking huts where the children catch their few hours of rest before they return to work at the factory just steps away. She stoops under the low doorway of one of the huts, and confers with the inhabitant there, her best friend, Mallen. Mallen is a boy known for his strength, both mentally and physically, even though both of his arms are maimed and crippled so that he can barely use them. Mallen, by order of the factory managers, oversees a team of children, kindly helping them to do their best work.

Presently, both Mallen and Kendra exit the little hut, and proceed to visit each of the huts remaining. In a short time, all of the children are gathered in a circle around Kendra and Mallen.

“Mallen and I have called you to this meeting for a very important decision,” Kendra begins, looking over all of the children. “I am sure that you will agree with me that we cannot survive this treatment much longer. And so, I have thought it over, and I have a plan.” She lowers her voice to a whisper, so as not to awaken the managers of the factory who sleep nearby in a grand house. “We are going to escape!”

A ripple of exclamations and murmurs pass through the crowd. Soon, a little boy about five years old limps out of the ring of children.

“But Kendry,” the boy lisps, “that is too dangerous. What if the guards catch us? Then they will hurt us, and I don’t like being hurt.” The boys face trembles, and he tries hard to hold back tears. “Please don’t let them hurt me, Kendry.”

Kendra draws the crippled boy close in her arms. “I know you don’t want to be hurt, Charlie,” she soothes, “no one likes to be hurt. But if we escape, we will never have to be whipped again! I will try my very hardest to help you and all of the others so that you won’t get hurt. Are you ready to listen to my plan now?” Charlie nods his head.

So Kendra, with Mallen’s help, explains her plan to all the children. Once every year, the factory managers leave for a short vacation. They leave behind an extra supply of guards and substitutes to make sure the children behave. But usually, as soon as the managers are out of sight, the guards relax their stiff salutes and immediately leave the factory building to enjoy their freedom, and talk with their friends, leaving only a few guards behind to watch over the children in the factory. The children know that if they disobey these few guards, they will get the worst whipping of the year. So every year the managers come back from their vacation and see all the guards back in their usual places, saluting them and ordering the children, who are as bowed down as ever with the burdens of their work. Kendra reminds the children that the annual vacation is coming up in less than a month. She tells them that then, if they all band together when there are but few guards watching them, they could overpower them, and, if they acted quickly, they could leave the factory gates behind forever before the other guards ever came back.

The children all stand up and silently applaud the two children, Kendra and Mallen, when the speech is at end. Every eye that can is shining with anticipation, and every pair of lips, if they are able, break into a rare and delightful smile, for they know that, even if “Kendry’s” plan is dangerous, it is worth the risk if there is any possibility of escaping their horrible home. Besides, they trust Kendra and Mallen, and they know that their two children leaders will protect them if it is at all in their power.

The next day, before the sun is up, each child is back at work, making shoes. But there is a difference in their faces, their attitudes, their eyes. They must only endure this toil for a little while longer, until they will be free forever.

In a matter of weeks, it is time for the plan to be put into action. The managers drive out of the factory gates, and the guards walk gaily off, laughing and joking with their friends. Ten guards are all that remain inside the factory, and do not pay much attention to the children. Every child is tense and ready for whenever Mallen shall give them the signal. Finally the time comes, and Mallen taps a child in front of him on the shoulder, twice. The child presses his neighbor’s arm firmly, and so on until Mallen’s touch is echoed throughout the whole factory, and until the last child, little Charlie, presses Kendra’s arm. All the children’s eyes look towards her and she rises up with a shout of exultation.

Then begins a mad rush upon each of the ten guards. The guards, bewildered, barely have time to act before they are tackled by heaps of furious and determined children. Soon all ten guards are laid flat on the ground, unable to get back up. A unanimous cry arises from every child’s mouth, and at once they rush to form a line between Mallen at the head, and Kendra at the rear. The little company moves swiftly onward, past the guards’ feeble cries for help, and madly through the door of the factory. Now they are halted at the foreboding metal fence. Mallen climbs up carefully, putting an agile foot in a chain-link here, and a chain-link there, making do as best he can with his crippled arms until he thuds down triumphantly onto the other side. A few of the bigger boys and girls follow. Kendra recruits a few more of the bigger boys to help her hoist the smaller children over the fence, and into the waiting arms of the children on the other side. At last every little one is over the fence, and the bigger children begin the climb, two at a time.

They are almost over when one lone guard rushes out of the factory, apparently recovered from the children’s blows. He shouts angrily at them to halt, but the children will not listen. The guard, seeing that he can do nothing by himself, races toward the grand manor in the distance where all of the other guards are indulging themselves in merry occupations. But as a last retort, he flings a sturdy stone towards the fence where the children are gathered.

The stone speeds towards its mark, and collides squarely into the back of Kendra’s head. Immediately, she crumples on the ground. So close, and yet so far! Mallen pushes through the crowds of children on the other side of the fence.

“Kendra!” he shouts, “Kendra! Get up! Do not leave us now. Kendra!” But still she lies in the dust, crumpled into a heap. Mallen thrusts one crippled arm through the fence. “Kendra…” he falters.

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The guard is panting for breath, but he has reached his destination. He storms into the room where the chief guard is playing cards with his friends.

The guard addresses him, gasping for breath, “Oh my lord Jethro, I beg to speak with you. It is an emergency!”

“What is it, Abnur?” Jethro asks, unmoved, while dealing out another deck of cards for his friends.

“My lord, the children are escaping! They overpowered all of the guards in the factory, (you understand that we were but few, my lord), and they are at this very minute escaping over the fence!” Abnur continues explaining vehemently to the chief guard, but receives no reply except “indeed.” “What shall we do, my lord?” he finishes. “Did you, or did you not hear me?” demands Abnur.

“He was not listening,” replies another guard (Jethro’s right hand man), “for I heard him say, ‘indeed’ several times during your short speech, which is a sure sign that he was preoccupied with something else.”

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At last Jethro looks up calmly from the cards he has finished dealing out.

“I’m sorry, Abnur. What did you just say?”

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Mallen pulls his arm out of the fence, and quickly starts climbing over to Kendra.

“What are you doing, Mallen?” inquires a little girl by the name of Mary.

“I must help Kendra,” Mallen answers. “Eric,” he directs his gaze at a robust older boy in front of the children, “You must lead them on. You know where we had planned to take you; now you must be the leader.”

As the children follow Eric, Mallen kneels down beside Kendra.

“Kendra! Are you all right? Answer me!” Gently Mallen pulls Kendra’s auburn hair back from her face. “Kendra. The guards are coming. But don’t worry, I will not leave you here.” He pulls her up to a sitting position, and starts to hoist her onto his shoulder to take her over the fence.

But Kendra opens her eyes. Mallen looks at her with ecstatic surprise. “Kendra!” She smiles faintly at him.

“Thank you trying to save me, Mallen. But now you must go and leave me here. I will come later, if I can. The children need you.”

“They need you too, Kendra,” Mallen pleads. Kendra tries to rise to her feet, but the pain in her head is too much, and she sinks to the ground again.

“I will be fine, Mallen. Please. Go.” Kendra’s voice is exhausted but firm.

Finally the guards have heard Abnur’s message and they pour out of the house, shouting angrily.

Mallen sadly obeys Kendra, and slowly, mournfully, crosses the fence. He waits on the other side. Kendra once again tries to stand, and this time she succeeds. Her head is reeling, but she wills her hands and feet to move through the pain. Slowly, painfully, she ascends the fence, chain-link by chain-link. The guards are drawing nearer. Abnur sights the two children ahead, and picks up a rock without a pause in his wild running.

“Halt, you little rogues, or you’ll be sorry!” he shouts. Kendra, nearly at the top of the fence now, looks back at the guard with a despairing glance. She hesitates, wobbling on the fence, until finally she begins climbing again. As she is finally climbing down the other side, the safe side, the rock comes whirling through a gap in the fence, glancing the side of Kendra’s face with a stinging pain. She gasps, but still continues her descent. Now she passes a “No Trespassing” sign, now she catches one last glimpse of the black factory in the distance, and then she falls, right into the waiting Mallen’s crippled arms.

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But now what is he to do? He cannot carry Kendra for long with his maimed arms, and the group of children is too far gone to hear his call. And then a figure steps out of the shadows.

“I can help, Mallen,” a little voice pipes up. It is Charlie! He has disobeyed orders to stay behind with his beloved Mallen and “Kendry.”

Mallen looks at him in astonishment “Charlie! Why are you here? You should be with the rest of the children! But no matter. For once, I am glad you have disobeyed. Here, are you able to tie a knot?” Charlie nods his head.

Soon, Mallen and Charlie have constructed a makeshift sled for Kendra. It is a sorry thing made out of a garbage can lid and some raveled twine, but it will have to do. Charlie loops the end about Mallen’s waist, and off they start, Charlie pushing from behind and Mallen pulling from the front. The guards have passed the factory, and are coming ever nearer. But the children are on the other side of the fence. A shower of rocks rains through the air towards the children, but few get past the fence . Soon, the rocks are out of range, and the children are safe – safe! Mallen and Charlie push on, down a short hill and over rocky ground, until they come at last to the group of children who have waited for them under a small grove of trees. There they stop.

Everyone gathers round Kendra, Mallen, and Charlie. Kendra opens her eyes again, and gazes up at all of the faces looking down at her. “Are we safe?” she asks them all.

“We are safe, Kendra. You have saved us.” Mallen smiles at her.

We are safe! We are free! At last, at last!

Kendra’s face breaks into a huge smile.

That night, all the children celebrate around a roaring bonfire, made from collected sticks and lit by the matches that Mallen had thoughtfully remembered to take with him. No matter what the future might bring, it certainly could never be worse than what they had escaped from. The guards would never catch them now – the children had crossed the boundary from Dromeda into the neighboring country, and there they can live safely.

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So yeah. I guess that’s that! The fourth story is pretty much finished already, but would you like my to continue the third one? Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoyed my writing!

***Allison***

Yeah, I know. These stories are rather late in making it to my blog, but at least they’re here! I am going to post all of the stories on my blog that I wrote for Loren’s writing challenge. Since I wrote 7 partial stories, I’m going to divide them into four or so posts. I think I like the first story better than the second. I started writing another story for the second challenge, only I didn’t finish it in time so I sent the princess one instead. I might post the partial story at the end of this mini series, and see if you want me to continue it.

*Disclaimer* I did not take any of the pictures in this post. *Sniff.* XD You can click on the “via” links to take you to the sites Loren found the prompts on.

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Challenge #1.

The noise and ruckus of the grand party in the Wheelwright mansion was getting to be too much. I needed a breather. I slipped away from the rest of the people, and into the grand hall.

                The long room was gloomy with dusky light coming in from the few windows above my head. The walls were lined with pictures of ancient ancestors and people long passed away. I walked softly down the hallway, glancing at the enormous amount of faces looking down at me. After a while, they all looked the same – all of them alike were stern, stony-faced men and women, with the occasional solemn child, peering down at me with a piercing glare. A few pictures were preserved Daguerreotypes from long ago. But it was one of the framed pictures that especially caught my eye.

                Among all the solemn faces, the person portrayed in this picture seemed to be the only one in the whole hallway who had a true expression on his face. True, it was not necessarily a nice expression, but it was an expression. The picture was of a young man. His features were strong and well-placed, but he had a haughty expression which ruined any handsomeness he might otherwise have possessed. He was actually smiling in the picture, but it was a tight-lipped, sarcastic smile. In the bottom right hand of the picture were written the initials “M.W.”

                There was something in the picture that impelled me to come closer. As I gazed up at the mysterious man, I noticed just a slight corner of some other paper peeking out from behind his picture. I stretched up on tiptoe and gently pulled at the corner. To my horror, the man’s picture fell completely out of the frame! What had I done? This was probably a priceless picture that I had ruined – and to make matters worse, this was a famous mansion! Then I noticed what I had accidentally revealed by peeling off the man’s picture. A new picture was in its place. I had no idea how or why it was there – it didn’t look like anything beautiful to me. The new picture was simply a picture of parched, cracked, earth and sky above it. It made me think of a famine. But when I peered at it more closely, I could discern some words written in rather sloppy handwriting at the bottom of the page.

                “If anyone should see this note, please, know that I, M. W., am in desperate need of your help. Please, rescue me! Enter this…” and there the note stopped.

                “How mysterious,” I thought to myself. “I wonder why the note is unfinished. Perhaps… I wonder if M. W is the man in the picture. The handwriting of the initials is the same as the note, although the note is definitely sloppier…”

                I looked again at the picture of dry, cracked ground. Although it was ugly, it seemed so real. On another sudden impulse, I reached out to touch it. Of course I should have known better, what with my recent catastrophe with M. W.’s picture, but somehow my hand just got a mind of its own. My finger was touching the picture before I even knew what I was doing. Only I never touched the picture.

                My finger went right through it. I pushed my whole arm through it, yet I never hit the wall. It was empty space. Suddenly, just as I had reached as far as I could, my whole body plunged forward as if by an invisible force – and I fell into the picture frame! I remember thinking in that split second, that this was the sort of thing that only happened in books. But I was real. I was alive.

                In two seconds I was in another world. It was not like the world in the picture. I had stepped out of the frame into a beautiful meadow with waving flowers. The weather was sunny but a cool, refreshing breeze blew across my face. It was like Paradise.

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                I walked through the waving stems in wonder. To think that there was another world! At the moment I thought of no danger, no fear, I thought of nothing besides exploring where I was. Then, far off in the distance I saw a small figure approaching. As it grew nearer, I realized that it was a man! Soon the he was very close to me, and I recognized him as M. W., the man from the picture! He looked exactly the same as he had in the picture.

                I approached him tentatively.

                “H-hello,” I said waveringly. “Are you, by any chance, M. W.?”

                “I am!” the man exclaimed. “You have found me at last, I am saved!”

                “What are you talking about?” I asked him.

                “The note. You found the note.” M. W. was still not making any sense.

                “Oh, right! The note says to come save you. But how did I save you?”

                “Let me tell you a story, Kallie. Once I was a young man who lived in your world. I was the pampered son of Richard Wheelwright, a millionaire and important public figure. I could have anything I wanted. One year for my birthday I received a slip of paper from my uncle, the picture that you have seen – a picture simply of cracked ground. Not knowing what else to do with it, I framed it and hung it in my room. I was afraid to throw it away for fear of provoking my uncle to anger. For some reason he seemed to attach high importance to it. One day all of my family traveled to a professional photographer to have our pictures taken. Mine developed quite well, and I decided to put it in the frame that held my uncle’s picture. As I was readying the frame I directly touched my finger to my uncle’s picture on accident. You will, no doubt, believe me when I say that my finger, then my entire arm, passed completely through the picture. Soon I found myself in this world, in every particular the same as you see it now. I was delighted with the discovery at first, but soon I grew tired of exploring, and determined to return home. But that wasn’t as easy as I had thought. I walked back to the frame through which I had entered this world, but try as I might, my body would not pass through the portal. I looked down at the ground, searching for a hidden lock, and spotted a lead pencil. I picked it up, and once again resumed my attempts. This time to my delight, my whole arm entered your world. But still, though I tried the best I could, you may be sure that no other part of me would go through the frame. In my despair, God gave me a thought that has saved my life. I stuck my arm through the frame and wrote the note that you have so lately read. And now I am saved. For in the many years I have lived here, I have come to the conclusion that the only way to get out of here is to leave with one other person. I know this because once in my wanderings I came upon a little hut where I now live that is filled with books. They tell of the magic that governs this place, and that is one of the rules.”

                “Wow. What a story!” I exclaimed. “I am extremely glad that I could save you, but can’t we just look around this world a little bit first?”

                “No. We must leave right away. There is a catastrophe waiting to happen in this world. I read about it in my books. In fact, we do not hardly have enough time to go through all of the procedures for getting out of this place. Quickly. Come with me.”

                M. W. grabbed my hand and quickly led me forward towards what I supposed was his house. I glanced at the sky above, and saw that the bright blue had changed to a threatening black. Thunder was rumbling and enormous clouds were gathering in the distance. This did not look good.

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Challenge #2.

“There is no other way, my daughter. You must flee.” My father’s eyes were filled with sorrow, and he struggled to keep his voice from wavering.

                Voices chased each other inside my head: There is no way out. We are surrounded… surrounded. The Hachians will conquer us now, unless… you flee. You, Anya, you are your country’s only hope. You must run from your only home, from the people that love you, you must run to anywhere but here. Run… run… run….

                I managed to choke out an answer through my pouring tears. “But father! Have mercy on me, your only daughter. I will die in the wilderness! The Hachian warriors will find me and kill me! Father, don’t make me leave. Please. Please, Father.” I wrung my hands and raised my eyes beseechingly towards my father, the king. “Even if they do not kill me, I will die from a broken heart if I am cut off from you and Mother. You know I will. I am not skilled in the art of endurance; I am only your humble daughter, Anya. Your princess. Is there nothing you can do?” My tears were rushing forth unheeded from the broken dam of my already shattered heart.

                “You know full well that I would save you if there was anything in my power that I could do, Anya. Mother and I would flee ourselves, even if it meant our death, were that to save your life. But you know that we can not flee. We must stay with our people. If we were to flee, the people would have no one to look up to. We are the rulers of Manitahn, and we must fight until the last glimmer of hope dies before us. I am sorry, Anya. We are only doing this for your good – if you stay with us at the castle, the Hachians will only take your life too. Besides, you are our only heir. If you flee, perhaps our line will live on. Lift up your head, Princess Anya, or the crown will fall forever.”

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                Just then Mother came up the stairs and joined us in the tower. She looked at me with eyes brimming with tears that she was trying so hard to hold back. But it was no use. She flung herself onto me, and we wept together for a long time.

                Finally my tears resided just a little bit. I pulled myself together, and asked father how I was to escape. He smiled a little and said, “That’s my princess! Now, Mother and I have planned your escape all out. We have found clothes for your disguise, for you will need to be disguised to get past the Hachian guards surrounding our castle.” My father held out the clothes. They were… well, black. No special crown, no jewels, no nothing, just a plain black dress with a heavy black veil and a pair of plain black shoes.

                “Th-that’s my special disguise, Father?” I asked doubtingly.

                “These clothes will help you blend into the darkness of night, Anya,” my mother explained. “Tomorrow night there will be no moon. You must take your father’s best-trained horse and slip past the guards at midnight, when they exchange places. Ride away from the castle as quietly as you can, but when you gain the hill, spare nothing and ride like the wind!”

                At first this all seemed like a good enough plan – risky to be sure, but what plan wouldn’t be? – but I had to remind my parents of one thing.

                “But Mother, how will I get across the moat?” Father replied without hesitation.

                “I do not know if you were aware of this, my princess, but the moat has been our only source of water for all of the weeks of siege. It is now partially empty from our usage, and Rantillo, being my best war-horse, should be able to swim it.

                I sighed. Honestly, I was rather disappointed that all of my objections had been answered. Now there was no choice but to prepare for my journey.

                The next evening I was ready. Rantillo was saddled, I was clothed in my disguise, and it was almost midnight. Mother and Father bid me one last tearful goodbye, and I left the castle, perhaps forever. The guards were just switching places, and Rantillo and I had enough time before they returned to swim the moat. As we were just riding swiftly up the hill directly in front of the castle, the guards returned. They quickly spotted us, and sent up a loud cry. Five warriors immediately answered the call by rushing towards me on horseback. Rantillo and I had gained the hill, and now I urged him to full speed. I could see the land spreading flat before me. The warriors were gaining on us, but they were still far behind. Rantillo and I sped on through the darkness ‘like the wind’ just like Mother had told me to. I soon passed the boundaries of our city, and entered territory I had never seen before. The land here was rocky, dry, and covered in pine forests. We took a little path that led straight through a grove of dark evergreens. We plunged into the darkness with the Hachian warriors on our heels. After a few minutes it was clear that the Hachian warriors were upon us. We were trapped! Before us a steep cliff of made of shining rock dropped steeply down, and behind us the Hachian warriors were preparing their spears! Rantillo was galloping at full speed towards the cliff which was getting nearer every second.

                “WHOA, BOY!” I yelled in Rantillo’s ear as I pulled at the reins as hard as I could. Now we were only feet away from the cliff. Rantillo tried his hardest to slide to a stop, but before he could do it, the Hachian warriors were upon us. Rantillo stood still, snorting and pawing the ground, just inches from the edge of the cliff. The foremost warrior commanded all of his men to halt with their spears ready, while he slowly drew out his bow and arrow and said,

                “Halt, young lady, or we will shoot.” His eyes were steel, his mouth was set in a straight line; I knew this was the end.

                “Go, boy!” I shouted to Rantillo. And we dropped off of the cliff. The warriors sent up a shout, and just as we were beginning to fall, I saw four spears and an arrow spiraling towards us. I ducked as low as I could behind Rantillo’s neck, and all of the arrows missed me. But, poor Rantillo! He had served me well, and now all of those weapons buried themselves in his neck. He let out a scream of pain, and became stiff. All of this happened in a few split seconds, which was all it took for Rantillo and I to finish our descent from the cliff, and come crashing to the ground. Once again, poor Rantillo saved my life. Without the protection of his body, I would surely have been killed. As it was, I felt an enormous shock go through my whole body, and I turned into a blaze of pain. I was about to faint when I happened to look down at poor Rantillo. What I saw woke me up with a jolt –  Rantillo had turned from a mighty war-horse into a stiff wooden horse!

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I was numbed with shock and pain for a moment, until my mind turned back on, and I realized that it must have been the deadly liquid on the Hachian warrior’s arrow. A few of their most powerful and learned noblemen had created a strong potion that they used the tips of their arrows that would instantly turn anything that came into contact with the poison, into wood. Even we on our remote kingdom had heard of this.

                I couldn’t feel anything of my body, but I didn’t care. Before anything else, I sat down and wept for Rantillo, the loyal and faithful war-horse who had saved my life. Eventually my tears subsided. I suspect my tear supply had run dry after all of the weeping I had done in the past days. I sniffed, and tried to stand up. To my surprise, although I hurt all over, nothing seemed to be broken. I cautiously peeled off my ugly black dress, the veil, and the soft but uncomfortable black shoes, and stood there in my own princess robes, looking forlornly up at the cliff from which I had fallen.

                I was in for another surprise. All of my life I had only lived in the castle and occasionally visited the surrounding villages. I had never learned much about the geography of our land, and what I saw was completely new to me.

                I stood there looking up at a land contained in a giant teacup.

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Yes, I was surprised too. But after the initial shock, it all made sense. the shiny cliffs which were actually teacup walls, and now I knew why the Hachians landed in our kingdom only by way of an amazing flying contraption – the teacup sides were impossible to scale. Now that I thought about it, we had never been under attack before except from the air. I dragged my aching legs back to get a better view of my world which I had lost forever. The pine forests, the great moon rising above the mists, the cries of owls as they rose from their nests to begin the hunt, my home… all of this I had left behind.

                But Father was right. I was the only one to continue our line. I would journey far and wide until I found a new home, though I would never forget my old home, and the people that loved me. I would lift up my head, and the crown would not fall. For I was a princess.

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Which story was your favorite? Do you want me to write more of either of them?

***Allison***