I used to despise most poetry, especially unrhyming poetry. But now… now I actually kind of like it! It lets you look at the world in a different way. And I have to admit, it’s pretty fun to write. 😀 I decided to share a few of my poems today, which I hope you enjoy. I’m not very experienced with poem-writing so any tips or constructive criticism is welcome. 🙂

poems
poems slip on tinted glasses
and make you look at everything
upside down and sideways
until you don’t know where you started
and even the plainest, dullest things
are something new and wonderful.
bonfire
warm, nimble fingers
grabbing for a hold
on slippery branches, paper, sticks
then giving up
and sliding down again,
but leaving black scars
to mark their path.
hungry flames
licking with soft strokes
melting the wood
with warm tongues.
a burning sunset in a ring of stones.
art
the language of imagination.
art is spoken not
with verbs and nouns
but with brushstrokes
and colors
and lines.
art is spoken not
with the mouth,
but with the fingertips;
not only with the mind,
but with the soul.
some people are fluent from birth
and some must work
to master it,
but like all languages,
anyone can learn.
pool
there is nothing quite like
a pool, with its
liquid burden of blue
which wraps around you
like an cool blanket
and holds you up
on its strong, soft back.
when you plunge beneath
the surface, you enter another world:
still, silent,
save for the whisper of
your body as it
glides through
the water.
pools are
freckles and brown arms
and pink shoulders
where the sunscreen was too thin;
bubbles swimming to the surface
like fragile jellyfish;
sunbeams dancing together
in intricate patterns,
a web of yellow light
shifting and shimmering
in the cool blue water;
a place where everything
moves in slow motion.
vacation
a few days of
condensed work
for a few days of
condensed memories.
piano
a funny language
with an alphabet
of dots and lines.
its sentences are
spoken not with
the tongue, but
with the fingers;
not with the mind,
but with the soul.
playing piano is
reading a beautiful
story out loud with
your fingertips, a
story sung by the
heart of the composer
and captured forever
on a white paper page.
little things
a dew drop hanging
from a blade of grass,
poised for a dive.
a perfect blossom,
opening it’s shy face
to the world.
a set of brilliant colored pencils,
lined up like colorful soldiers
in their square tin.
a sunset burning up the sky
one flaming cloud at a time.
a basket of vegetables
sun-warmed and fresh picked.
i sometimes think
the best things come in
small packages.
don’t you?
the sound of summer
the deep bass of bullfrogs,
the cymbal clash of thunder,
the low roar of a lawn mower,
the staccato pop of canning jars sealing,
the juicy crunch of a watermelon slice,
the splash of a rock thrown into water,
the buzzing crescendo of cicadas,
the shrill soprano chirp of crickets,
the sweet melody of birdsong,
all weave together,
into a beautiful symphony:
the sound of summer.
That was fun! And yes, I am aware that the “art” and “piano” poems are very similar – almost exactly the same in some parts. But I couldn’t bear to change those parts out and I wanted to share both of them. XD
Which poem was your favorite? Do you like non-rhyming poetry?
***Allison***
P. S. Guys, you should really check out Hayley’s ATC trade! She needs a few more people to sign up before the trade is worthwhile to do, so if you like art, you should definitely look into it! 😀 And in case you’re wondering, I’ll be doing the trade too. 😉
Nice work. Checkout some Poems that do not rhyme, on my blog.
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Thanks! Okay, I will.
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Amazing … especially the one about art 😊
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Thank you so much! I like that one too. 🙂
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We welcome you to our crazy land of poetry! *grins evilly* now you can never leave!
Hehehehehe I am actually not all about rhyming poetry. I mean sure it is fun to read but if you focus too much on making words rhyme, you might loose the essence of your piece.
I wrote a poem today on Poetry. You can check it out on my blog if you wish. 🙂
Loved your post!
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HA HA! XD
Yeah, I know what you mean. Sometimes you have to work so hard on the structure that you can’t make the content good.
Okay, sure! I’ll go check it out.
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I liked your poems. I think bonfire is my favorite. I don’t feel that poems have to rhyme, but I really love when they get a rhythm going. I also liked some of the simplicity. Not everything has to sound like Shakespeare.
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Thank you so much! And yes, I agree!
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Great imagery (and I don’t mean the provided images) for each one! I can really see and feel what you’re saying as I read.
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Ha ha, thanks so much!
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Maybe take a glance at mine? Just started a WordPress. You might enjoy them! I publish regularly
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Sure! I’ll go check it out.
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Another poem lover over here too…✌✌
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Yay! 😀
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A very good set of poems. My favourite is the pool. Reminds me of why I started writing poems in the first place. I think poems need not necessarily rhyme, and still be beautiful, like yours. And the simple words are what come directly from the heart. Good luck.
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Thank you so much! And yes, I totally agree! Aww, thank you. ♥
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Lovely poems! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading! 🙂
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Could I borrow some poems for the short poem book im making? (Not for selling, for my lola (grandma)
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Sure, you can use them for your grandma! They’re copyrighted by me as far as selling goes, of course, but I love when people share my poems. 🙂
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thank you! She will love them!
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