Hey, guys! I hope you had a great Thanksgiving if you live in the U. S. I sure did! Each of our three celebrations was delicious, and it was fun getting together with family. 🙂
Anyway, today I decided to share a few more of my poems, since you guys seemed to enjoy seeing the last ones and I seem to enjoy writing them. 😛 Again, they’re unrhymed poetry because number one, I am NOT very good at putting my thoughts into the boundaries of rhyme, and number two, I like the free, flowing feel of unrhymed poetry. Don’t get me wrong, rhyming poetry is amazing too, I’m just not good at it. XD
Ahem. I shall begin.
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sky soup
the sky is
a bright bowl turned over,
set upon the earth,
filled with clear blue broth
and floating mashed potato clouds,
peppered with black birds.

old one
skin crinkled and wrinkled
like a brown paper bag,
crumpled and creased
year after year,
until it is smoothed out,
soft and mellow from
the crush of Time’s hand,
lined with the paths
that the smiles and tears
left behind.

galaxies
my eyes are galaxies
with a star for every time
they didn’t come back
and I was left again –
one star among millions
and yet alone in space.
but each time they left,
I stood up again
and swallowed my tears,
adding more stars
to my galaxies,
hoping that my eyes
would shine bright enough
next time,
that they would see this light
in the darkness
and come back for me again.

raindrops
drumming.
pounding.
whispering.
tapping.
fast free falling.
sticking without glue
to everything they touch,
but only for a time and then
moving on again,
sliding sadly downwards.
weeping
to leave everything behind.
wavering, shivering,
quavering, quivering,
collecting, reflecting,
greens and grays together.
a drop reaches
the edge of the window
and
falls
off.

talking rocks
what if
there is a rock somewhere
that watched as the world was made;
that saw its perfect beauty break
into a thousand sharp thorns;
that carried the footstep
of the first fallen humans –
and the only perfect one –
on its back;
that felt the first drop of blood shed
and will feel the last;
that was thrown at martyrs
and held by kings
look closer at the next pebble
you kick down the road,
and wonder what stories
are locked inside its silent heart.

abandoned house
blank eyes,
a dusty soul,
a cobwebbed heart.
broken teeth,
a dry mouth,
a creaking voice.
but when the breeze passes by
and lifts the tangled weeds
from the old mat in front,
you can hear the old house
still whispering, “welcome.”

orion
what would it be like
to recline among the stars,
held together with twinkling joints,
drinking big dipperfuls of the Milky Way
and conversing with
the man in the moon?
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Ahh, that was fun. 🙂 I hope you enjoyed reading those, dears – I’d love to hear which one was your favorite!
Which do you prefer, writing poems or stories? Poems are easier for me (mostly because they don’t have a plot, heh), but stories are fun too. 🙂
***Allison***

Your poems are so beautiful! I love your style and your pictures. It just sounds so…I dunno, mystic. XD I think that my favorite would have to be the Galaxies one. 🙂
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Aww, thank you so much, hee hee! Oh yes, I like that one too. 🙂
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Love the “raindrops” one! I prefer writing stories.
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Thanks so much, Yashvi! 😀 What are your favorite stories to write?
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Just random stories, about life and fiction, I guess. 🙂
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Yeah, that’s what I mostly do too. 🙂
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Cool!
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Oh my word! These are such beautiful poems! Compared to this mine kind of dull. But I’m glad you’ve found something you like to do! My favorite is probably Raindrops. I really like the ending.
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Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked them and the raindrop one! ♥
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Lizzy!
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😊
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Your poems are so lovely! I especially loved the Orion one. 🙂
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Aww, thanks so much, Nicole. 🙂 Yes, that might be my favorite too!
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I think my favorite was the Abandoned House or Talking Rocks.
I prefer writing stories, but I have written a few poems.
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Thank you so much, Mandalynn! 😀 Ooh, good for you. 🙂
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😊😊😊
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😀
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😘😘😘
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Wow, these were beautiful, Allison! I really loved the rock and rain ones! 😇🌲❄️💕
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Aww, thanks, dear! 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Oh my, this was so brilliant! I especially loved the one about the rock, it held so much meaning… You are so talented! <33
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Wow, thank you SO MUCH, Mukta! ♥
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I have no words for these! Is there no end to your talents? The ‘Galaxies’ on was b e a u t i f u l. It nearly made me cry.
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Oh my goodness, Gracie! That made my day! Thank you so much. ♥
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Aw, it’s my pleasure, Allison. Xxx
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These were so beautiful- you’re a natural! X
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Aww, thanks so much, dear! ♥
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Just wow
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Aww! ♥
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I loved all of them! Yes, I prefer writing poems over stories 😉
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Thank you so much, Hannah! 🙂
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I liked the way you made the sky seem like a bowl of soup! I like writing stories better!
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Thanks so much! 😀 And neat! 😀
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Ooh, I loved these, Allison!! I think the “old ones” poem was my favorite. You’re great at poetry! 🙂
Also, I have a rather odd request. XD Sarah (for-all-who-wander.blogspot.com) has a birthday tomorrow, and I’ve been gathering birthday messages from a bunch of her blogging friends to add to the birthday post I’m doing for her. Is there anything from you that you’d like me to add to the post? 😀
Thanks so much!
-Clara ❤
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Thank you so much, dear!
Ooh, that’s a great idea! Unfortunately I don’t feel like I “know” her that much besides through comments, so… 😦 I wish I could add something, though! I can’t wait to see the post (that’s a lovely idea!)!
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Oh, it’s totally fine! Thanks anyways! 🙂
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I wish I could contribute.
I’m sure Sarah will be pleased, though! (Or not, from what Megan was telling me. XD XD XD) Sure!
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I loveeee the one about the sky!
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THANK YOU!
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Ahhhh I love these so much!! They’re so simple but beautiful. ❤️❤️
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Aww, thank you so much, Sarah!
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Gorgeous ❤
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Thank you! ♥
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Your words just flow so beautifully!
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Aww, thank you so much!
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I love all of them! especially the Abandoned houses poem, it is so beautiful and… true! Thank you for sharing!
Lydia
abitoflifesite.wordpress.com
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Thank you so much, Lydia! It was my pleasure. 🙂
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You really are clever and observant, creative and spiritual.
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Aww, thank you so much!
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Wow! That was really wonderful, Allison! I loved those!!! Each so great! 🙂 The rain one was probably one of my FAVs!
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Aww, thanks so much, dear!
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No prob, bob! XD
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XD
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You have a great imagination!! I’m not sure which one was my favorite, they were all great! 🙂
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Hee hee, thanks so much!
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Your welcome 🙂
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“Poems are easier for me (mostly because they don’t have a plot, heh)” 😂😂 That made me laugh out loud.
Most of my poetry ends up being comical limericks, but it’s still fun! I definitely love writing stories best though.
Your poetry is so beautiful! It was so fun to read and you are so talented!!
—Madi
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HA HA! XD I’m glad it did – it’s true! 😛
Hee hee, I can see that. Good for you!
Aww, thank you SO much, dear!
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This is amazing! I really like poetry. Actually, I just kinda scrolled through this list, but was still blown away! XD
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Ha ha, well thanks! 😀
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I prefer writing because I never write poetry! Hehe, it’s a bit more time consuming and challenging for me.
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Heh heh. 🙂
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These were so beautiful, Allison! My favorite one was Talking Rocks. I loved the part at the end about the rocks having stories “locked inside a silent heart.” ❤️
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Thank you so much, Olivia! That was fun to write. 🙂
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These poems are so beautiful! I love the romantic, flowly feeling of poems that don’t rhyme. There’s a fresher feeling to them 🙂 Keep writing, Allison, I love your style! 🙂
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Aww, thanks so much, Lydia! ♥
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Definitely the poems! They are so beautiful ❤
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Why thank you! ♥
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gosh these are beautiful ❤ xox
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Thank thee. ♥ HEY, YOU’RE BACK!
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YEP I AMMM the results will come out soon. SOON I HOPE. HAHAHA
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AHHH YAY. Ha ha, but it’s okay. 😉
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Oh, I loved these! They’re so beautiful! I love to write poetry and stories, I don’t know if I like one better than the other. 😉
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Aww, thanks, dear! Ha ha, that’s a good way to put it. 🙂
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Well written. I like galaxies pretty much.I hope you keep writting stuff
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Why thank you! And don’t worry, I will keep writing. 😀
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Lovely.. my favorite was galaxies in my eyes
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Thank you so much! I like that one too. 🙂
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Your poems are amazing. I loved them..
I prefer writing poems as well.. 😀
Please do give a read to some of my poems as well and let me know your valued feedback..
Keep up your excellent work. 😀
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Thank you so much, hee hee!
Okay, I will check out your blog. 🙂
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Your welcome!! Hope you like my poems.. 😊
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Love this. You inspire me so much 🙂
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Aww, that made me SO happy to hear! Thank you. ♥
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you! ♥
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You don’t need to rhyme. You are awesome anyway. The true poetry is written with the heart, not with the rhymes. You are more talented than me. 😀
Who is your favorite poet?
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Aww thank you! ♥ My favorite poet? Goodness that’s hard! I dunno. I do like Emily Dickinson’s whimisical style though. 🙂
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I just joined today and came across your poems and I love them! I was touched by “Galaxies” and the “Old House”. I enjoy writing poems—more on acrostic, haikus and ventured into triolets, too. I consider myself a novice and I write whatever is inside my grateful heart. Thanks for the share and hope to read more of your work!
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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you like them. 🙂 Ooh, that sounds neat! Oh I’m definitely a novice too. 😉 Thanks again and thank you for commenting!
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Wow! All the poems are really beautiful! I loved it!
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Thank you so much! 😀
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The poem is beautiful and so are the pics 🙂
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Aww, thank you!
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Welcome 🙂
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nice poem! I did one on my blog but about 2017!
internationalaw.wordpress.com
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Thanks! Ooh okay, I’ll check it out!
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good poem
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Thank you!
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The ‘old one’ great metaphor used and such depth❤️
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Aww, thank you so much! 🙂
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Beautiful. Visit my blog sometime.
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Thank you! Okay, I’ll check it out. 🙂
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These are all so goooood.
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Aww, thanks! ♥
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Love the “raindrops” and “Orion”
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Thank you! 😀
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Great post
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Thanks!
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Very beautiful! Check out my recent one! https://wp.me/s9t3QW-fearless
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Thanks! Alright, I’ll go check it out. 🙂
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